Friday, 8 June 2018

Foods on Mars (Elliot and Jonathan)

WALA: finding reliable information from more than 2 sources and learning about how people use food in different places.

Thursday, 29 March 2018

(Elliot writing) Exode

this is my descriptive writing


It has been years or maybe centys but i can still imagine the big rock monster that is still there. Then unexpectedly little rock humans arose like they never knew what happened. One by one rock people found each other, wondering what to do. Then the little boy found a toy model of a dinosaur. The started to move to somewhere they'd be safer. But on the journey they spotted lice On the Giant Rock Monster. The stronger man started to fight back but more just keep coming so they had to bail. In a big line they all walked, Through the ice Lake, And back through the desert again. They're like robots that never stop walking, And then finally they're there. There is much more to come

Wednesday, 21 March 2018

All about me

Descriptive Writing

I've been working on descriptive writing. I've tried to give a the picture in the mind of the reader.