Monday, 2 May 2016

My nutty news

Nutty News story

Yesterday Mr Mc Prey  (spinosaurus Rex) was on his Jurassic World  farm shifting the utahraptors when T.Rex came. ROOOAAARRR!!! Went T.Rex. They Had a Gigantic Fight.ROOOAAARRR! Roared Mr Mc Prey
Then… Spinosaurus bit him in the neck. Spinosaurus won. ‘Yus’. said mr mc prey.  
                                   The End


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2 comments:

  1. Lily R9 August 2016 at 12:06

    Hi Elliot,
    I like the way I can sense enthusiasm in this! Where did you get the idea for this? And "yus" is really "yes". Great effort!
    from Lily

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