Hello Eliot, I am a yr 7 that attend Panmure Brigde School. I really like your camp reflection. I think it has nice theme. For example when you were talking about night time at camp it was black and some words were white. I think you shouldn't of added in the movement when you turn the slides. Good job Elliot
Hi Eliot, I am Jericho from Panmure Bridge School.Your blog post is very intriguing.I like that you have chosen a very creative way of writing your story. I don't think you should use different colors for some backgrounds because it does not stand out. For example you could use white on slide 4 so it would be more clear. But I am looking forward to you to grow as a blogger.
Hello Eliot,
ReplyDeleteI am a yr 7 that attend Panmure Brigde School. I really like your camp reflection. I think it has nice theme. For example when you were talking about night time at camp it was black and some words were white. I think you shouldn't of added in the movement when you turn the slides. Good job Elliot
Hi Eliot,
ReplyDeleteI am Jericho from Panmure Bridge School.Your blog post is very intriguing.I like that you have chosen a very creative way of writing your story. I don't think you should use different colors for some backgrounds because it does not stand out. For example you could use white on slide 4 so it would be more clear. But I am looking forward to you to grow as a blogger.
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ReplyDeleteThanks, I am Elliot and i go to paparoa range school. It took me two days to finish this.
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